my writing

Hi guys Luther here back with another blog today I will be talking about my writing. This is my writing that I  have doing in silent writing hear it is it is called dead island.
Chapter 1

‘Ahh family a family vacation’ says mum ‘don't say too much this is going to be crap!’ says alex as he plays his games ‘alex you're 13 you should not be saying that’ says mum ‘ahhh this is your captain speaking please turn off all your devices’ says the caption on the mega phone ‘ahh really do we have to’ says alex then skirt the tiers of the plane touch the ground and the plane bumped up and down ‘can I go on my phone now please’ says alex ‘no alex no more devices I am sick of it turn it off!!’ says mum as we were driving to the hotel the cab driver said ‘there has been a ebola outbreak happening it has been turning people into zombies take caution out there good luck then the cab driver drives off but as we were sleeping the hotel people had caught the virus and they had turned into zombies. (The next morning) ‘good morning alex’ say mum ‘good morning mum’ says alex but after alex said that they both heard moaning sounds ‘what is that’ says mum in fear ‘probably some drunk people’ says alex ‘yeah thats right drunk people but as alex walk out the door he looked left then right then slammed the door shut ‘mum get a knife there are dead people walking come to our door’ says alex in fear ‘really crap ok I will go get a knafe’ says mum but then grrr grr the zombies smash through the door and start walking towards us ‘mum what do we do’ says alex ‘we jump’ says mum ‘mum no you will die’ says alex ‘I don't care’ says mum then see jumps and dies ‘mum nooooo’ says alex then he starts to cry ‘ahhh!!!’ says alex then alex goes on a killing rampage and kills all the zombies in his hotel room. ‘Ahhh I think that is the rest ahh crap more of them’ says alex then alex goes on a killing rampage once again ‘there they are all gone ok let's get a car and go talk to the doctor of the city’ says alex but as he walks outside he sees that his mum has gone and has turned into a zombie.

Chapter 2

‘Ok I got a car but now I need to get some gas and maybe a gun’ says alex so he keeps on walking down the road until he comes across a big deserted army camp ‘ok good let's go and steal the guns’ says alex