writing the assassin

   This is a draft copy of my story. Sorry if some words are not right. This is what I have been doing in silent writing.

 chapter 1
The beginning
Its 1755 march 14 a new child was born his name was conner he was a cute baby and really short. 5 years later. Hijink [cooner be safe]said mum jfd jfd [ok i will] said conner. As conner runs off to play hide and seek as Conner hides from his friends as connor is hiding connor gets pulled down from the tree to watch his town burn to the ground he heard his mum scream
Chapter 2
A new assassin
Its 1812 i am 23 years old the Templars took the ball of power without that the world can end i must stop them. pairs 1814 i'm 25 i found the templars in paris but i have a waken from the amunis ‘we have run out of power’ said Ethan ‘we need to go to mexico’ said sharia ‘ok’ said seamus
Present day 2012. ‘Seamus you need to get thru security’ said Ethan ‘ok’ said seamus as he walk past he was stop by security seamus punches the man he punches back a big fight starts 10 minutes later ‘seamus run’ said Ethan ‘i have the power for the  i amunis in the cave’ said seamus ‘good’ said Ethan as they were driving away the car was shot  at seamus open the boot and starts shooting back
‘They're gone’ said seamus ‘good now let's go’ said Ethan. When they got to the cave seamus went back into the amunis


Chapter 3   
The pain
Its 1815 as i am walking around and looking for food and shelter for the night to sleep in  i hear a woman scream i run to see the woman ‘are you ok’ said connor ‘help!!!!’ said the lady ‘i am coming’ said connor ‘what's wrong ’ said connor the woman stands up then stabs connor in the chest then she runs away. But connor gets up to get some help and he is looking he sees a man he runs to help ‘connor what's name’ said the man ‘connor’ ‘ok connor let's get you some help sell we.


 
Chapter 4
New home


‘Thank you sir now what's your name’ said connor ‘my name is john’ ‘hi john’ said connor john lived in a tall brick house with 3 doors and a he had a big basement were the big assassin suit was and he has a 2 story house and i seeped up on the 2nd story. doom ‘wow what was that’ said connor ‘let's go look’ said john as they walk to the door the door i smashed open and the enemy comes running in and starts the look for us ‘there they are there getting away!!’ one of them said ‘connor run’ said john ‘ i am’ said connor after 2 minutes of running they come to a cliff ‘jump’ said john ‘no way i am’ said connor ‘just do it’ said john ‘ok’ said connor as they jump into the water they get shoot but they dodge it and make it in the water safely. As they were swimming off they were shot at from the west ‘ there are people swimming to us to kill us ‘ quickly swim swim!!!!! 2 weeks later ‘ NO!!!!! What are you talking about i am an assassin’ said connor ‘no ur not connor’ said john ‘ you know what i leaving’ said connor ‘ fine then leave’ said john connor slammed open the door then left the house and got on his horse to ride off to new York






Chapter 5
War
Its 19 April 1775 i hear gun shots at the night i get up and put my suit on get my tomahawk and look out the window i see a big war happening so i stand back then run and jump out the window then i land on a bad guy who was going to go in the house then i see British troops i run up to them then stab one and kill the rest then i see the leader so i run up to him then stab him bat as i did i get pulled away then put in a carriage to get hanged as i was in the carriage i said ‘Thomas hickey did this he is a templars and he is going to watch me get hanged’ as i looked out i saw a gigantic war happening it was huge but then the carriage stopped all i could see was a line of assassins to stop the carriage then all i hear is screams of people dying then the door opens and i climb out then my assassin friends are standing there waiting for me.


















Chapter 6
The end    
Its 1945 i am 299 ´i am going to die soon´ i tell my kids ´what happened to john’ said the kids then i say ‘he died 23 years ago’ ‘ok said the kids then i die


The end

Comments

  1. Wow Luther, that was a very action packed story. I think that you were missing a few full stop in there, but apart from that it was a great story. I hope to read more of your silent write pieces soon.

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